overall summary of your blog: well matt, what can i say? whats here is really good but it's pretty thin on the ground!! i'd expect to see much more independent research than this, also you've listed the theories but not applied them at all. there's a set hwk missing too - the syd field/ fatal attraction one. also what about ideas for your production - you need to be demonstrating how your research is inspiring your ideas. we're moving on to analysing opening sequences now and also camera and editing and i would have expected all this stuff to be finished at this stage. you have some catching up time still if you want it, but all I can say at the moment based on whats here is that this is currently worth a C at AS. have a look at the girls' blogs in your class - they blow yours out of the water, seriously!! ms b
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hey nice visual ideas here matt - great work - a really orginal idea to focus on one area. well done
ms b
overall summary of your blog:
well matt, what can i say? whats here is really good but it's pretty thin on the ground!! i'd expect to see much more independent research than this, also you've listed the theories but not applied them at all. there's a set hwk missing too - the syd field/ fatal attraction one. also what about ideas for your production - you need to be demonstrating how your research is inspiring your ideas. we're moving on to analysing opening sequences now and also camera and editing and i would have expected all this stuff to be finished at this stage. you have some catching up time still if you want it, but all I can say at the moment based on whats here is that this is currently worth a C at AS. have a look at the girls' blogs in your class - they blow yours out of the water, seriously!!
ms b
btw - can't find the syd field hwk anywhere??
ms b
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